Commit Graph

863 Commits

Author SHA1 Message Date
Nick Mathewson
3fd2a03563 Reinstate sentence at start of 7; add page numbers
svn:r769
2003-11-05 03:53:20 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
663a4d9638 Spell P5 right.
svn:r768
2003-11-05 03:46:13 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
2ebad9853d resolve some XXX's
svn:r767
2003-11-05 03:44:58 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
b6f88fc066 Edits to edits. Revert change to central gutter width; cut back down to under 15 pages.
svn:r766
2003-11-05 01:58:07 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
6c68317577 compress sec1-3, we're at 15pg with standard latex8.sty now
svn:r765
2003-11-05 01:46:32 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
868b3c9724 more edits and compression
svn:r764
2003-11-05 01:29:36 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
03925bc60b Edits for section 7. I am happier, and the paper is finally under 15 pages.
svn:r763
2003-11-05 01:18:10 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
b449d65ca6 Spell checkers are smarter than we are
svn:r762
2003-11-05 00:15:11 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
bfa8831c18 Edits, cleanups, and clarifications in 8 and 9.
svn:r761
2003-11-05 00:12:18 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
5c9e0685e6 More edits to edits; a few formatting fixes
svn:r760
2003-11-04 22:52:39 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
5823d508df Tighten and clarify sections 4-6; paper is shorter by a couple of column-inches.
svn:r759
2003-11-04 22:17:53 +00:00
Paul Syverson
7f350d80b1 More space hacks. No content removal.
svn:r758
2003-11-04 18:39:31 +00:00
Paul Syverson
e1ac0c03de No content cut. Just lots of space games. Will keep at it.
svn:r757
2003-11-04 18:00:40 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
cb97bf8c06 revamp secs 8 and 9
i haven't figured out what order the paragraphs in sec8 should go.
or sec9, for that matter.
please fix it. :)


svn:r756
2003-11-04 14:59:58 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
55057a3929 address andrei's issues
svn:r755
2003-11-04 11:46:49 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
18a7e51eb2 commit for nick
i'm now only working on 8-9


svn:r754
2003-11-04 09:04:35 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
9944853468 you guessed it, more edits
svn:r753
2003-11-04 08:34:50 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
f081a7a41f Edits to section 9
svn:r752
2003-11-04 08:30:10 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
23fabf60e5 Move (nonwritten) discussion of path selection
svn:r751
2003-11-04 08:16:25 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
c72d57c92e Fixes to last checkin
svn:r750
2003-11-04 07:35:58 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
256ee49a2d Edits based on comments
svn:r749
2003-11-04 07:27:55 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
ad0e3d02fe compress 'compromise keys'
svn:r748
2003-11-04 07:18:16 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
bcbb0bc0d5 rerepatches on sec1-3
svn:r747
2003-11-04 06:54:09 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
44ff60dbaa Edits to most recent edits from arma.
svn:r746
2003-11-04 06:03:29 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
7b19ba8aa1 Tighten up 1-3; clarify a few points
svn:r745
2003-11-04 05:42:50 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
a76a61fef6 patches, mainly on sec4
svn:r744
2003-11-04 05:39:38 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
7234c8393f formatting changes, no edits
svn:r743
2003-11-04 02:34:05 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
2595770c1f minor edits on edits on edits
svn:r742
2003-11-04 02:24:30 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
19c83bdee1 More work on section 4; replace IP with IP address.
svn:r741
2003-11-04 02:22:24 +00:00
Paul Syverson
ac83d91703 Various edits.
svn:r740
2003-11-03 21:44:02 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
2dcafa8527 Edits to recent edits.
svn:r739
2003-11-03 21:05:33 +00:00
Paul Syverson
3a0d3b7c89 Fix small version error I introduced (I hope).
svn:r738
2003-11-03 18:28:31 +00:00
Paul Syverson
a0ad394c8c A few changes, mostly to section 4 before Nick picks it up again.
svn:r737
2003-11-03 18:12:14 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
a3a01e85aa a first go at section 7
svn:r736
2003-11-03 14:27:00 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
1c493d4893 remove sec7.1. you're right, it's redundant now
svn:r735
2003-11-03 13:17:26 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
93f3eec00c patches on nick's sec4 patches
svn:r734
2003-11-03 12:07:02 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
d7f7e64c9f rearrange and clean up sec1
svn:r733
2003-11-03 10:29:18 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
1fa9b39310 rewrite and tighten section 6
svn:r732
2003-11-03 09:17:47 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
e7c0b74c8f note need for ACI->circID change
svn:r731
2003-11-03 09:13:20 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
961f338386 Edits on section 4-- not done, but done for tonight
svn:r730
2003-11-03 09:06:58 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
88185d4cb2 Edits to sections 2 and 3.
svn:r729
2003-11-03 07:02:20 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
d66e9d888f give us a real abstract
svn:r728
2003-11-03 06:29:43 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
ba97004f5b Some style and euphony edits in 1 and 2. Tweaks on "which", "number", "tradeoff" and "Section" throughout
svn:r727
2003-11-03 05:34:14 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
e4e5bc601e more minor commits
svn:r726
2003-11-03 02:54:52 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
2bd41ec8f5 clean up dirserver section
svn:r725
2003-11-03 02:25:04 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
3c417a80dc remove/resolve several comments
svn:r724
2003-11-03 02:09:31 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
2133ece8e4 Edit abstract; ref jap backdoor; declarify jap padding; convert metatext to comments
svn:r723
2003-11-03 01:47:54 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
c18327f239 add puzzles-tls cite
svn:r722
2003-11-03 01:25:41 +00:00
Roger Dingledine
fed6cb8e68 rewrite exit abuse section
svn:r721
2003-11-03 01:03:00 +00:00
Nick Mathewson
49b1c0e95c Write attacks+defenses vs rendezvous pts
svn:r720
2003-11-03 00:52:50 +00:00