diff --git a/doc/spec/control-spec.txt b/doc/spec/control-spec.txt index 64596bac97..4886a4ba89 100644 --- a/doc/spec/control-spec.txt +++ b/doc/spec/control-spec.txt @@ -362,18 +362,20 @@ $Id$ not necessarily those for a descriptor that Tor currently has. [First implemented in 0.1.2.3-alpha.] - "ns/all" -- Network status info for all ORs we have an opinion about, - joined by newlines. [First implemented in 0.1.2.3-alpha.] + "ns/all" -- Network status info (v2 directory style) for all ORs we + have an opinion about, joined by newlines. [First implemented + in 0.1.2.3-alpha.] "desc/all-recent" -- the latest server descriptor for every router that Tor knows about. - "network-status" -- a space-separated list of all known OR identities. - This is in the same format as the router-status line in directories; - see dir-spec-v1.txt section 3 for details. (If VERBOSE_NAMES is - enabled, the output will not conform to dir-spec-v1.txt; instead, the - result will be a space-separated list of LongName, each preceded by a - "!" if it is believed to be not running.) + "network-status" -- a space-separated list (v1 directory style) + of all known OR identities. This is in the same format as the + router-status line in v1 directories; see dir-spec-v1.txt section + 3 for details. (If VERBOSE_NAMES is enabled, the output will + not conform to dir-spec-v1.txt; instead, the result will be a + space-separated list of LongName, each preceded by a "!" if it is + believed to be not running.) "addr-mappings/all" "addr-mappings/config" diff --git a/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt b/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt index 6900646416..918176bf79 100644 --- a/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt +++ b/doc/spec/dir-spec.txt @@ -109,9 +109,9 @@ $Id$ * The most sensitive data in the entire network (the identity keys of the directory authorities) needed to be stored unencrypted so - that the authorities . Now, the authorities' identity keys are - stored offline, and used to certify medium-term signing keys that - can be rotated. + that the authorities can sign network-status documents on the fly. + Now, the authorities' identity keys are stored offline, and used + to certify medium-term signing keys that can be rotated. 0.3. Some Remaining questions @@ -258,7 +258,7 @@ $Id$ "Exactly once": These items MUST occur exactly one time in every instance of the document type. - "At start, exactly once": These items MUST occur in every instance of + "At end, exactly once": These items MUST occur in every instance of the document type, and MUST appear exactly once, and MUST be the last item in their documents. diff --git a/doc/spec/proposals/103-multilevel-keys.txt b/doc/spec/proposals/103-multilevel-keys.txt index ce4da1fee8..859e456613 100644 --- a/doc/spec/proposals/103-multilevel-keys.txt +++ b/doc/spec/proposals/103-multilevel-keys.txt @@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ Extensions to Proposal 101. for that voter. A key certificate is invalid if any of the following hold: - * The version is unrecognized + * The version is unrecognized. * The fingerprint does not match the identity key. * The identity key or the signing key is ill-formed. * The published date is very far in the past or future.